Aaron Bai Reviews Poem by Sahil Phadnis — Part 1
- Aaron Bai
- Feb 11, 2023
- 2 min read
My co-founder, Sahil Phadnis, is a big poet. However, I wanted to provide my honest opinions on his publications.
"Featured on Yahoo Finance" by Sahil Phadnis
This poem was originally written and posted on www.sahilphadnis.com.
Here's what I think about Yahoo Finance in a poetic lens:
Oh Yahoo Finance, a place of wealth and gain, A place to keep track of our financial gain. With stocks and bonds and market trends, Helping us to make informed ends.
The charts and graphs, so bright and clear, Giving us insights, year after year. With news and analysis, always on hand, To guide us through the financial land.
From bull to bear, we watch it all, With Yahoo Finance, we never fall. For we have the tools and the power too, To make informed decisions, just me and you.
So here's to Yahoo Finance, our financial guide, Helping us navigate the markets, side by side. A place to grow our wealth, day by day, And build our financial future, come what may.
Aaron Bai's Review: 7/10
Pros:
From a literary perspective, the poem utilizes factual references (such as referencing references the concept of a bull and bear market) to convey a sense of trust in Yahoo Finance as a reliable financial guide.
The use of vivid language and imagery in the form of bright charts and graphs enhances the reader's understanding of the platform's offerings.
Cons:
The poem contains several grammatical errors, such as the repeated use of "gain" in the first line and "informed ends" in the third line, which should be "informed decisions."
The poem does not provoke any thoughts nor introduce any new ideas on the subject of finance. It's structured more like an advertisement than a heartfelt tribute to Yahoo Finance.
Overall, the poem effectively communicates the benefits of Yahoo Finance, and uses simple and rhythmic rhyming patterns, making it a pleasant and memorable read. 7/10
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